Charlie II

"So, we can either track Clara and find Elizabeth, or?" Jake's question hung in the air, unanswered. "Or what?" "Well, I guess there aren't really any other options." Jake sighed. ...

Any Suggestions on how to un-bumm myself??? Well, I'd try to engross yourself in something else. Maybe another novel but if it reminds you too much of what you're waiting ...

Follow up on the follow up :? ? Art and I had gotten ourselves pregnant [...] *Blushes* Ok, 'ourselves' it is then. When Art graduated, I started going part-time for ...

Hiking. It gives me a bit of time to think and be alone and away from the bustle of life. I think I like it because it's just so quite ...

*Sniffs* It's really quite sad :( . It was a good house—two stories, three bedrooms, a two car garage—but it was never a very good home, though I was sure ...

I just spent about 20 minutes writing out a full critique before my computer froze and I lost it. I'll piece back together as much as I'm able to without ...

Well, this is very different . I agree with the other in the fact that your style is very fluid. It dances on the page and it's nice to listen ...

I really have no idea where this story is going at the moment so hopefully others will. I personally like the idea of the 3000 year old vampire looking for ...

Guys, if we really want to continue this then we should make a 'discussion thread' so we can plan what's to happen next. I'd hate to ruin someone's plans by ...

I've not found there are too many mistakes in Wikipedia, but the main problem I've always found is the technical language. If you're doing research that need to only slightly ...

Sorry guys. I haven't been able to get to a computer this weekend so I guess I'll add a bit now. Ooops :? . Wierd , thought Jake. And I ...

Interesting. I'd like to say 'once a day' but looking at my profile, that's a big fat lie. I must be doing about a 'few a week' but I'd really ...

'The End.' I hate it! I mean seriously, does a story ever end? Unless some smartie pants author decides to destroy everything so completely and utterly that there is absolutely ...

Jake Catheby 16 Quiet Quick thinker Dark brown hair Brown eyes Deeply interested in the unknown Wearing: - Jeans - Blue shirt - Trainers I hope this is ok, I ...

What do I think? A lot better than your other works. This shows how far you've come as a writer since you wrote your first few posts. This is brilliant. ...